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When it comes to the question that whether it is wise to put all eggs in one basket,most people will say ,of course ,it's unwise,so do I.Following are the reasons of my opinion. On the one hand, all the eggs are like all our assets ,if we put them all in one basket,and when we fall down or because of other force powers that will break all the eggs,that means we will lost all the assets,it is too upset and maybe some people without strong-will cannot accept the fact.On the other hand ,if we can put the eggs in different baskets ,that just like a investment ,as time goes by ,maybe we can many interests.In this way, we can avoid the adventure.What's more ,although you would like to save time or resources in order to bring the eggs to a safe place,we need to consider carefully before we want to do this ,may be you think it is easy ,if you consider the disadvantages and advantages of doing this ,you must will find the disadvantages is more than the advantages .From that we can see ,it is unwise to put all the eggs into one basket. In a word ,if you want to keep all the eggs safe,it is unwise to put all the eggs in one basket,if you put the eggs in different baskets,you will get more benefits .
