小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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My summer vacation was so interesting. I had a lot of spare time to do the things I like. I often read novels in the morning. From TV, I had learned how to cook. It was wonderful to eat the lunch that I cooked personally. Though it was hot in the afternoon, I loved doing sports with my friends,such as playing basketball and football.If it rained , table tennis is a good choice. Sometimes I would go to the Expo to enjoy the view of the world.As you can see , my summer vacation was so meaningful and interesting.