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Tom is my one of my good friends.He is tall.He's nice.We ofen play with each other.We talk to each other. Why we so close?We are good friends.My family's house nearby his.We go to shcool together every day.We do homework together too.But we never copy each other's homework.We are all good at our study.We are the best in the class.And we are the best friends in the class.