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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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To: KPOHsales@163.com From: hubin@163.com Dear Sir or Madam, I have learn about your new product which number is 5670 at exhibition In New York on Dec.15th-22th, and I am intrested in it very much. Coluld you please provide a price list and an production instruction for us? Thanks in advance. Thanks for your cooperation and hoping we can establish business relationship in the future. should you have any questions, please let us know. Best regards, Helen
