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Marry, since I need to Beijing for business trip, I can't attend the meeting to discuss the matter about how to hold a party for New Year's celebration. please do me a favour, please let me konw the agenda and location once it was confirmed. and please also let me know what prepation we need to follow up. Thanks for your kind help.nice day.