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The greatest ues of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. I think life which has a magical power can give you different feelings in some ways. In my opinion, we ought to make our own life become more meaningful. As me for an example, i am a college student so my lessons are less than senior school.Due to this,I have more and more spare time to arrange my myself. I make an plan to handle my free time because i want my life to get more meaningful rather boring. I go to library to brorrow some books which are about my major course to read that I can gain knowlege. Sometimes,I participate a lots party that it can make friends and communicate with them ahout something interesting. How a meaningfui life. All in all, the impotant thing is that we should make our life more meaningful
