2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

A strong will is the important key of succeess. having a strong will, we can bravely face the difficulties we met. And then,we can find proper solutions to solve these problems one by one.If so,we will mtake much progress in realizing ours dreams's way. we wii succees at last. A man who has a strong will can accomplish the great missions. For the missions,we have a sense of responsiblility that st.imulates us to chase our goals. It is invisible power in our inner to inspirate us to mee and handle all kinds difficulties. SO do students, if not hardworking at their study,they can't become useful men that can make a contributution to the soliaty finally.Nothing succeeds without a strong wiill. therefore we should have a strong will for the sake of reaching our goals.