语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强学术词汇的使用;请注意分段。
as conveyed from the headline,it is wrong to make a decision as soon as you seeing or hearing. why are we talking about this problem, because there are so many people now do something before think about whether it is right or wrong. if everyone do like these,they will be very sad, because they could fail to complete their things. let us look at some exemples, first, if you see a elapse ,you can not say the moon is disappered .
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