Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From this chart we can see that pays have connect with tightly education. Education pays in hight degree are much further than lower.desipt,most people who have less than high school diploma are contect to the most unempoyment.contray to,people who have perfessional degree they have the most hightest pays in the chart.