题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
Man and Computer The using of computer has occupied all walks of life in resent years , especially in our daily life. With more people than ever using computer in their workplace, a problem worthy of thinking deeply now sets before us, that is ,with time goes on, man will begin to think like the the computer. No matter whether you admit this opinion or not , you must have seen the phenomenon that computer using is now substituting the hand writing and brain thinking . Because of its convenience that it can analyze dates automatic, its easiness which people can achieve the consequences they want and the store of some fixed patterns for people to use. So that,people begin to incline to computer in the working place. The question comes ,when people find these convenient conditions , they become laziness to use their brains, they also don’t need to deliberate how to do their work . As time passes ,what the computer calculates,they will think that are all accurate. Though people invented the computer , it doesn’t follow what people think anymore.On the contrary, people will begin to think like computer in the following days.