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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day of fifth month in lunar calender. It is a festival in honor of Quyuan, a loyal official in ancient times, who devoted himself to the country but was not understood by the emperor. As a result, he killed himself by jumping into the sea with a stone. To avoid his corpse eaten by fish, people throw food to the sea, which we call rice dumplings wrapped in leaves. Nowadays, we celebrate the holiday in different ways. People in northern and southern part of china spend the day in different ways. However, there is one thing in common, beat rice dumplings. Yet, northern people would hold dragon boat contest, an amazing activity. I'm fond of this festival not only because that we can enjoy a three-day holiday,but also known better about our traditional culture. Many of people around me hold the same attitude with me. The Dragon Boat Festival is historical treasure left by our ancestors which should be cherished.
