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YU YANG Tower The nice city Yue-Yang which loacts in the north of HuNan province is my hometown.No matter who come to visit my hometown ,I will take hin/her to see the outstanding building-YueYang Tower. Yue-Yang Tower is one of the four famous tower building that represent the tower history of China.It was built in ming dinasty and very famous since then.Every it attracts serveral millions people, including some move star and many visitors from all over the world.It is not just a building,it also repersent our culture.If you climeb up the top of it ,you can enjoy the fresh wind comes from dongting lake which is the largest lake in the middle of our country.After that you can tast a lot of local food such as spaicy duck and yueyang soup bean and so on. After eating you can do some buy memorible stafs for your friends.In the evening ,you can dance with the local people and other visitors. It so fun and so meaningful place to visit .I am sure my friend will like it.
