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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29): Make it

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:09浏览次数:458
要求:
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意:
(1)根据以上提示,结合事例写一篇文章,120字左右。
(2)语义连贯、条理清晰、详略得当。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基础较为扎实;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

It's a common situation between us that we can't decide what we can have,but there is one thing we can determine is that we can make use of what we have. In fact,it's easy for us to make use of what we have.When we are confronted with the difficulties of using dislike things,we shouldn't move out of them,on the contrary,we have to confront them.Moreover,as the proverb says,to get something you have never had,you must do something you have never done.It's a truth that we can change anything into what we want,because we have the abilities of making surprises. Last but not least,if we offer to do the things we don't like,we will recognise that our heart will lead us to the excellent future.

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