作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基础较为扎实;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
It's a common situation between us that we can't decide what we can have,but there is one thing we can determine is that we can make use of what we have. In fact,it's easy for us to make use of what we have.When we are confronted with the difficulties of using dislike things,we shouldn't move out of them,on the contrary,we have to confront them.Moreover,as the proverb says,to get something you have never had,you must do something you have never done.It's a truth that we can change anything into what we want,because we have the abilities of making surprises. Last but not least,if we offer to do the things we don't like,we will recognise that our heart will lead us to the excellent future.
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