2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Nowadays , there is a heat topic has arised people"attention called Excessive Packaging. The resons of this phenonmennon is wide respects.On the one hand,the society is devoloping ,people live in a better respect,they have more money to conmuse,on the other hand,education is an importment reason,many people have no sence of how to economize,and they think that the earth has enough resourcese for them to waste. Where from i am stand,i think that we shuold to advocate economize,