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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22875
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意文中一些句法错误,文章会更不错;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写;请注意分段。

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I am live in a small town, when I was young, there were a lot of tree around it,there were so many fishes swimming in the river, most of the people are poor and the houses were thin and roads were narrow, but people very happy and enjoy the fresh air. now,there are many high buildings build,a lot of facotry instablish,most of people have a lots money,but they are not happy beacuse when they talk a walk in the street,might smell the bad smell and see many rubish,the river without fish now.we hope come back past,we call out the govement to deal with this problem agerently.

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