2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；衔接成分偏少；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

The draw indicates family relationship from thirty years ago to now. A mother bring her child walking happily away of the left part of the cartoon, while in right of the cartoon it is changed as mother getting old walking along with beautiful big girl. What a lovely, happiness and optism situation!