2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；衔接成分偏少；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

The draw indicates family relationship from thirty years ago to now. A mother brings her child walking happily away of the left part of the cartoon, while in the right of the cartoon it is changed as mother getting old walking along with beautiful big girl. What a lovely, happiness and optism situation!