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2005年考研英语作文真题:A letter to your Mr.Wan

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:55浏览次数:1800
要求:
题目 A letter to your Mr. Wan
说明 Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.
要求
1.Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang
2.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
3.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
字数:100满分:100分

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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Dear Mr. Wang , Thank you very much for having offered me this promise job to work for the company. It never occurred to me that I would have to leave. However, today I make the hard decision to quite it. Painfully, I have realized that I overestimated ability. My personality actually can’t match the requirements of this job which highly values open-mindness and creativity. What’s more, the shortage of professional skills or knowledge and relevant working experience, both in designing and editing, have influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected. I apologized for any inconvenience I might have caused. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

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