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Dear Mr. Wang , Thank you very much for having offered me this promise job to work for the company. It never occurred to me that I would have to leave. However, today I make the hard decision to quite it. Painfully, I have realized that I overestimated ability. My personality actually can’t match the requirements of this job which highly values open-mindness and creativity. What’s more, the shortage of professional skills or knowledge and relevant working experience, both in designing and editing, have influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected. I apologized for any inconvenience I might have caused. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming