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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;从句使用量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
There are a book marked as traditional culture, lying on the ground. Sorrowfully,The elderly is trying to make a simple grave in memory of the fading traditional culture. Below the picture is the caption- buried traditional culture. The cartoon is striking and though-provoking, shedding a light on the issue that we think ever less highly about traditional culture. This is indicative of civilization decline. But what accounts for the eclipse of traditional culture. The primary reason is that civil focus more on the virtual than literature, handicraft, and so on that root on the age before video game, mobile apps, as well as theme film. Especially the youngsters, they tend to abandon the physical world for the virtual. Thus the traditional culture on certain extent is convulsed by the technology innovation. For example, today people dwell on weibo reading a short paragraph of literature, releasing their opinions within 2oo words. There are ever less people reading the whole literary books. The traditional culture woes. Moreover, as goes the globalization, so goes invasion of foreign culture. And this tide seems hardly to resist. As we all known, we are surround by movies of Hollywood, McDonald. Meanwhile,we ever more weight highly on the western festival ,like Christmas,Valentine’s day, April’s day, but gradually neglect our traditional festival. Nevertheless, what we have deserted is the treasure that ancient leaves in the history of more than five thousands. So the promotion of traditional culture should be put much value on. Believe that our excellent culture will have a splendid future.