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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19623
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, two single-legged people stride forward without walking sticks to rely on. With the support of each other, they have successfully abandoned their crutches and start a new journey, just as the caption at the bottom states, “ You have merely one leg and so do I. Help each other, we can travel all around.” Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of cooperation. Many things contribute to career success. But the most important may be this: team work. Aspiring leaders in most companies all share the idea that cooperation can bring out the best in his teams. Why ? The answer seems self-evident. First and foremost, cooperation based on the complementary advantages that contributes to the ultimate success. Furthermore, high integrity and healthy winning attitude by team spirit. It is my point of view that, to emphasize the importance of cooperation is to indicate a powerful way to success. Just as a well-known saying, “United we stand, divided we fall.”

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