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As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, two single-legged people stride forward without walking sticks to rely on. With the support of each other, they have successfully abandoned their crutches and start a new journey, just as the caption at the bottom states, “ You have merely one leg and so do I. Help each other, we can travel all around.” Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of cooperation. Many things contribute to career success. But the most important may be this: team work. Aspiring leaders in most companies all share the idea that cooperation can bring out the best in his teams. Why ? The answer seems self-evident. First and foremost, cooperation based on the complementary advantages that contributes to the ultimate success. Furthermore, high integrity and healthy winning attitude by team spirit. It is my point of view that, to emphasize the importance of cooperation is to indicate a powerful way to success. Just as a well-known saying, “United we stand, divided we fall.”