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作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看？给出具体原因。
字数要求:300字以内。
熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章用词太过单一，另外请作者加强单词拼写的检查。
Actually, i have two parts.The first parts about i agree some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people ,The second parts is disagree. The first parts about i agree some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people ,Which is living in a rural area people,they are has a lot of money in the account,just every one will keep going for the life,they are has plently of vegetables ,the food is heath and the body is stronger. The second parts about disagree,that living in the downtown will be better for the work,And will be great for the view,if living in the downtown,they are will be know a lot of fun for the knowlege . So,i just agree and disgree.
