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作者词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，但拼写错误比较多；作者在句法层面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨。
Going with the advancement in economy and technolog, there are growing number of individuals choosing to live alone or geting married without planning a baby in future. From my point of view, this trend is dued to three main reasons and could cause impressive effects on our society and individuals. Generally, there are three aspects causing this phenomenion. Firstly, the life pace is increasing and the competition is intensifying, with the development of our scoiety, which push individuals focusing on the working instead of developing a relationship and having baby. Secondly, the morals of individuals have changed with increasing revolutions in freedom and egoist. in other words, they are lack of responsiblities and selfish, which are enemies of having a relationshiop and raising next generations. Last but not least, the cost of having a relationship and having a baby is unafforable for some group. There is a survey saying that the cost has increased approximately 50% compared with our parents. Meantime our salaries just come up 20% and our time is devoted to works instead of enjoying life. Hence, the stress from fast pacing society, changing morals and increasing life cost contribute to the trend. The change of population, which is an essential component of society, could inevitably affects our future. Some agree that, it could helps to reduce population in word, and lead some race exitigushing within decades as well. Moreover, it would affect the labour marketing in the future that not enough young to contribute our countries which reduce our life quality, such as not enough nursers in home care. What is more, the level of happiness of individuals are reducing, as families and childrens are crucial factors in human life. Therefore, the trend could affect the population distribution, scoiety contribution and individal life quality in the future. To conclude, the development of society in technology and economy goes with many aspects, such as increasing life pace, intensitive competition and increasing sense of freedom and egoist, push people to live by themselves or marriages without kids. That could result in world's population distribution, scoiety further development and individal life quality.
