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In morden life people have busniess work ,some people feel happy and other in reverse .It is because people face some difficult thing which has family problem or work problem .what do we do and how do we do.The very important that we solve the difficult problem with happy attitude. First of all,it is happy to facing worry .when we solve the problem we feel happy ,we help family to live comfort. think about only can we achieve our valuable we can become happiness.life is not boring.We can find that we live the peace world. Second,life is not softly so we should try our best to showing our special ability and so on.for example,to leaning some silk can help us to aqcuie some high profess .It means that a high quality silk makes us happy and feel pride. All in all,something not very makes us unhappy or boring,something has diffent good.
