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The Internet chating or the Face-to-face talking It is a hot debate that whether the internet do harm to people's daily life or not. As the internet is becoming more and more popular, the number of people who are online would up to 20 million by the end of 2000. And this phenomenal growth have affected people's life in large scare both on society and on economy. More people have paid attention to this phonomenon. As for me, I mostly concerned it's impact on society. Nowadays, people have created many software on chating. QQ is one of them which appealed many people. It is true that chating online is charming. First, people can chating with strangers online so that they can talk freely. No one would punish them even if they talked without manner. And they can expelled their shyness to chat with anyone on the basis of no one will remember their faults or weaknesses. Second, the friendship on internet is very limited but controlled. Once they are bored with this connection, they can moved their friends' nick name from the list. Their persuit of freedom make them adored this way of chating while this way is harming their relationship between their friends, famillies and so on. It's so unlucky that more and more teenagers catch disease in their psycologies. The lack of oppotulitie of talking with others face-to-face may let them lose ability to express their true feelings. At the same time, they will pay no attention to their manner as talking online need no good temper. Meanwhile, parents may be disappointed because of their "shyness" and their bad temper. People should chat face--to-face so that they can care others' expression, others' figures, others' attitude and they can maintain the ability of communicating with others. And then the society will be more harmony.