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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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TV, as an entertainment equipment, can be seen in almost every family.Going with the popularity of TV in our daily life, there is a hot debut that whether it is good for children to watch TV or not. Some point out that watching TV totally does harm to children. The opposit agree that watching TV comes with some good points. From my point of view, watching TV, like a two-sided sword, has positive and negative aspects to children. Watch TV could do bad effects on children from two aspects. Firstly, watching TV could account for the time which need to be spent on studying.It means watching TV could distract their concentration on studying. Moreover, there is some unhealthy content in TV, like violence, children are too young to distinguish between right and wrong. Secondly,watching too much TV could alien family members. It is usual to see that all the families keep eyes on screen instead of chating. Some even could fight with each other as there are not enough televisions at home. Hence, watching TV could do harm to children due to affecting their development and family relationship. However, there are some merits going with watching TV. On one hand, TV is a good medium to spread information from other countries, which could broaden children's horizon, even they donot go abroad. There is indeed some bad programes on TV. But children can choose to watch the good ones under surveillance of their parents. On the other hand, the time during watching TV could be a family chatting time, which could prompt the ties between family members. Because the programe could be as a topic between them. Therefore, watching TV could help children getting much information and increase family ties. In summery, watch TV could bring about disadvantages to children, such as affecting their study and reducing family communication or even fighting. Meanwhile, watching TV could not only broaden children's horizon and knowledge but also could increase family ties, if programes are chosen carefully.
