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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33616
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用学术词汇;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

wasting money is a bad habit.but how to save money?in our daily life,there are a lot of methods of wasting money.going shopping,eating outside,shopping on the internet...if you want to save a large sum of money in a short time,you should develop a good habit of expenditure.Do not go out for dinner,eat in school.make sure what you buy is essential to you,do not buy some unnecessary things.decrease the times of shopping on the internet.shopping on the internet can't make you feel the outcoming of the money,so,you will spend more money in this way.try to keep a good concept of money,then you will save a lot of money.

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