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wasting money is a bad habit.but how to save money?in our daily life,there are a lot of methods of wasting money.going shopping,eating outside,shopping on the internet...if you want to save a large sum of money in a short time,you should develop a good habit of expenditure.Do not go out for dinner,eat in school.make sure what you buy is essential to you,do not buy some unnecessary things.decrease the times of shopping on the internet.shopping on the internet can't make you feel the outcoming of the money,so,you will spend more money in this way.try to keep a good concept of money,then you will save a lot of money.