2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

作者词汇基本功很好，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

A Tranquil Land Fiery-red sun have hung on the sky all day, at this time, it has been buried into the earth early. But the sunset glow still remains, and spread out in the sky, which appear a gold line. The marshmallow cloud has piled on cloud to form a ridge of white towers, rearing against blue sky. The cloud moves slowly. Even we can’t feel the subtle change for it. It seems that it dare’t shift its position in case that break the tranquil atmosphere. Looking from a distance the mountains look as if they are smaller than the house. In addition, due to the coming of night, the mist begins to emerge, which makes the mountains partly hidden and partly visible. So if you approach closer, you will find that the scenery of the hills is so amazing. Now, there is no wind, and the peaceful lake looks like a mirror. The sky looks into the mirror, and the color of sky and lake become identical. In the distance, there is a beautiful villa. A writer is creating his outstanding works. He likes this place very much where can stimulate his unique inspiration. Every morning when he opens the window, he can scent out the smell of fresh grass and the fragrance of the flowers. All of this make him relaxed and happy. The European -style house is builded by white tiles, and it looks clearer under the clear sky. In front of the door, there are two trees, one is a pale-green pine tree, however, the other’s leaves drop out. For a while, the birds fly through the blue sky. They are attracted by the brilliant flowers, and fly low in order to smell these flowers. The wind is blowing that puffed away the seeds of the dandelion, and the dandelion flutters with the wind. Some are high, and some are low, which looks like the beating of the notes. After a while, they are leaving there and going back to their homes in a line. At this moment, the brooks are still flowing wildly, and nourish the vibrant land. Look! The grass waves and says to the brook:”Hi , creek, thanks for your effort.” Gradually, night falls. All the life enter into sleep.