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请作者增加学术词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
My Best Friend When I sat at the desk, trying to write the essay, I found it hard to set pen to paper.However, when I looked through my photos, these pictures took me back to the days in the last two years. During that time, I met many friends here,but Stacey was one of the most memorable persons in my mind. I still remember that everything seemed messy and strange when I first came to this school. I did n’t have any friends in this school,and I felt very lonely. It was at a class meeting that I first saw her. I knew that we would become best friend from that moment I saw her, and the memory still gave me goose flesh. Her beautiful appearance really caught my eyes immediately. She was a pretty girl. She got an oval face, a pair of watery and intense big eyes, thin, was very tall. Her hair was long and black with the ends of the hair curled under smoothly in a loose roll. Since then, we became close friend. I never felt lonely anymore, because we did nearly everything together. We ate together, studied together, went shopping together and bathed together. We both felt we were made for each other, and we never quarreled. We understood and respected each other, and we helped each other in every practical manners.Not only she looked beautiful and elegant,but also she was a warm and caring girl.Once we went to buy some fruit and cake, on the way we met a ragged woman sitting on the ground . She could not help having compassion for the poor creature, so she gave the woman a piece of cake. Apart from doing these, she never refused others who asked her for help. In the beginning, I knew little about her preference and living habits. Gradually, I knew quite a lot about her. Last May Day holiday, we went to Dalian together, and visited some famous places. On the way, she took photos of hers by herself constantly, and I was ignored. From this time on I found she was selfie-addicted. Until now, every time she wants to take a picture of her face, I will make fun of her. But she just smiles at me shyly. As a language leaner, we face many difficulties, and we both have inferior academic backgrounds, therefore, we have to practice more and more. During the process, sometimes I feel very disappointed and want to give up. She always encourages me patiently. She is an optimistic girl,and never sends negative message to me. She believes that a smile-a-lot girl never gets too close to misfortune, so she always keep smiling. Her smiling face warms the hearts of those around her. I feel very fortunate to be blessed with having her as a good friend. I will treasure our friendship and never forget her.