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Today ,I want to recommend my hometown to you,which names Dongtai.Since it is a small town,it is the best beautiful place in the world to me. At the first sight of it,you can feel that the air here is so fresh that nobody wants to leave here.This town is filled with flowers and trees.I am proud of it because of its glorious history.Fanzhongyan,a poet who poeeses a lot of spread works,worked here for long time and he made a quantity of contributions to peple.At the same time ,there are abundant tales hanging on,especially o love story,which was set in two different classes.Although their ending is misreable,their love moved everyone. A lot of things are awaiting your coming to dig,I look forword to your visit.
