文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂,需要多使用一些学术词汇;请注意分段。
I ask a psychology teacher named Kelly Lam about chinese students 'opinions of sharing feeling last weekend .The fact is that no matter is happay or sad ,the students more than 30 percent is not willing to sharing with others.And our education does not make students know the importance of sharing. The teacher thinks it is necessary for our students to learn sharing feeling at the age of our living. Besides,we should learn how to share feeling,which does well in that we grow up .