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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文章用词太过单一，本文单词拼写错误较多；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
Nowadays ,more and more people use the Internet to talk to others ,which is convient for people to conmunicate with others.However ,with elocotric talking devoloping ,we reduce our face-to-face talking graudully.So ,whether the elocotric talking can replace face-to-face talking ,now I will give my views about it. I gashp that elocotic talking can't replace face-to-face talking.The reasons are as follows: First ,we can express our real feeling by face-to-face talking.Second,we have many time with our family and friends,which is so valueable for us .It's the vital of importance for us to talk to our family.Last,elocotic talking maybe is dengrous . In summury, I think we shoud use more face-to-face talking.
