2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping With the social developing,online shopping becomes a fashion way to purchase.As we know,online shopping has mang advantages for us in our life, but everything has two sides.So it also has some disadvantages. On the one hand,we can save many time by online shopping,and only we can do is that waiting our thing.And online shopping has big discount ,we also can save many money.Maybe it is the most more reason for people to choose online shopping.On the other hand ,the quality maybe is bad if we shopping in the Internet. From my views,online shopping is convenientfor us,we can make many choice when we shopping online to make us buy good things.