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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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若增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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It's not very wise for us to get a conclusion just through hearing or seeing instead of thinking.If you do that,you will make many mistakes or get in troubles. If we want to resolve this problem,we should follow those tips.First,we should learn more knownalges,because only if you have enough knownalges you can understand a thing you meet very cleanly,then you can decide how to do with it.Second,you should calm down and wait for a moment to see what will happen next about the thing you just face to now.You shouldb't do a decide as soon as you seing or hearing somthing.Tird,tinking is very important.When you get in somethings,you should make way to know what it is really mean.There are always have various reasons for a thing's happening. For a word,learing more,thinking more.

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