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It's not very wise for us to get a conclusion just through hearing or seeing instead of thinking.If you do that,you will make many mistakes or get in troubles. If we want to resolve this problem,we should follow those tips.First,we should learn more knownalges,because only if you have enough knownalges you can understand a thing you meet very cleanly,then you can decide how to do with it.Second,you should calm down and wait for a moment to see what will happen next about the thing you just face to now.You shouldb't do a decide as soon as you seing or hearing somthing.Tird,tinking is very important.When you get in somethings,you should make way to know what it is really mean.There are always have various reasons for a thing's happening. For a word,learing more,thinking more.
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