文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;有效的运用了一些复杂句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is no doubt that all of us want to live a happy life,but we often have trouble in finding the way to arrive at the destination.So we entail upgrade ourselves. The improvement of our ability is necessary.To start with,nothing is important than the fact is that you should belibve in yourselves.You must,in fact,trust your ability to do everything what you want to do,only in this way,can you approach the happiness.Moreover,for people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful lifestyle,it is essential to do find time to learn certain new knowledge,just as an old saying goes:it is never too late to learn.Last but not least,we must work diligently to contribute ourselves to the society.That is will reflect your value and boost your confidence. As for as i concernde,if you do the above of all,you can get a happiness life.