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雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:国际事件 International Events

发布时间:2013-07-15 15:56浏览次数:670
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The Olympic Games is a major international sporting event and the opportunity to host this event is keenly contested by many countries. In your opinion, what are the major benefits and drawbacks of hosting an international sporting event such as the Olympic Games?
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International sports events are so significant that numerous countries apply for the position as the host every time those international commissions that establishes these meetings select the next host,for example,the Olympic Games,a worldwide famous event which succeeds another every four years,have seen lots of states take part in the competitions to be the host country. Holding such splendid and influential international sports meetings of course brings plenty of profit to the host countries.First of all,it can enlarge the influence of the host cities namely it can help the cities spread out the civilisation,culture without the limitation of the national border.Secondly,it would attract tens of thousands of foreign visitors, dealers, businessmen to visit the host cities and undertake the short-term commercial trades,in addition to that,more tax would be obtained by the local governments.It can advance the local economy finally. It has so many adventures as I said,whereas there are some drawbacks.Before the beginning,countless natives are bound to leave where they used to live to save the land for the new constructions for the sports meetings.That might lead to a lot of unjust and unfairness.

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