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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
From this picture we can easily come to a conclusion that the Internet communication,nowadays, have change our communication with people around us, even stop us to have a good emotion communication with our family. Today, Internet chat tools have helped us to talk with our friends,families who living far away from us,making it easy to community rather than writing letters. However, there are still some disadvantage of the Internet Communication which can never take place face-to-face contact. First of all, the letters and words on the computer are cold without any sound and emotion, which can not express your mean to other. What's more, sitting in front of the computer does do harm to your physical health.Last but not the least, when losing on the Internet, you are going to lost the ability to talk to people in the real life eventually. In a word, Internet community is in favor of community with others when you are in a long distance, but it will never be better than listening the word by yourself.
