Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。
Today ,more and more people communnications is choose electronic communication than face-to-face contact . Not only childrens and adult but also the old men ,they are few of face-to-face contact ,instand of they are prefrom to used the QQ or Weibo with others contactions on the computer and callpone . About this things ,I think it has adventadges and disadventadges for people .In the first ,It is able to rise between people and others friendship .In the sceond ,It also give simpely for our life.However ,It will make people lose their communication skills . So ,we should take a good way to used it .