托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Is it worthwhile only if we win when we participate the competition? There is no doubt that the more happiness and a sense of achievement will come up with if we end up as a result of champion. However, it doesn't mean that there are no fun if we don't succeed at last, so that the idea that only we win the game finally that it's worthwhile for us to join in the competition is unrealistic. Sometimes, the reason why we participate in the game not only for the champion, but just enjoy fighting against with others during the competition. All no matter of the result, we will make progress at last. What's more, the great entertainment we will own from the circumstance that fighting against with other people. As a matter of fact, the intention of the competition is to succeed for almost of people. However, there is hardly possible for every one of us preventing from the failure on our lives, and even people who have been striving may fail finally. Are there no fun or worth for them? Cetainly not! It's certainly that it's very regret for people who have been desired to succeed, however, they make progress during the failure again and again, which is real a little frustrating, the abilities of themselves will be increasingly improved. Furthermore, they have a good time till the end of the tournaments. All in all, it's understandable for people who participate in the competition to win, however, sometimes, the same happy as wining the champion we will feel though we are in the face of defeat. After all, the failure is a building block of success and the intention for us to fight against with other people is to improve ourselves. What's more, not only will the entertainment we get, but also can we find out our shortcomings if we join in the game. Last but not least, the people who are always in the face of defeat but succeed at the last will be more modest and careful in the competition. After all, easy come, easy go, so that the characters of people who get the champion with the failure several times will grow up while they are falling with the happiness from wining in the competition.