2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查。

In our dailylife people always make a decision at firrst time when they look or hear something,most of us are used do this,but it is unwise. Why is not unwise,I have my own upnion,follows it's my reason. On the one hand,if we make a decision at first time we look or hear something,maybe we just look or hear a section of all of the things,but we make a deciside at that time,the decision can only reflect one hand or more about all the tings,but not all.On the other hand,we make a decision only use our iituition and never think about the resone,the decision will be not unwise ,because it's what you think about not the things and our decision maybe mislead other people to think about this. So I think we should think something when we look or hear somgthing at first time.