2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Now ,online shopping is becoming more and more fashion . Most people like to go shopping in the online than to go to shopping store .why ?There have many reasons about online shopping's advantadges and disadvantadges: The advantadges is that it is dirt cheap , At the same times ,It also take a few of times for go shopping .Last but not least ,The people will not worn out .However ,It's disadvabtadges not only the things haven't perfect than the store's but aslo It very dangerous to our mony . Above of it ,I think that we should take care of it to use .