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It is not wise to make a conclution instantly after seeing or hearing something.Our eyes and ears are not always accurent in distinguising the truth.But nowadays many people believe that what they have seen or heard is just right and they will often make the mistake of others.In my opinion,I am concerned that it need long time for us to know the truth or it will misleading ourselves by the face. An old historal story said that once there was a teacher named kongzi, who had told one of his students to cook dinner for everybody.When he pass the kitchen, he found the boy was eating the rice quietly. He assumed that this boy was so unpolite to eat before anyone else. When Kongzi blamed this student with angry, the little boy told his teacher the turth. In fact, he had found that there was a little rice that was not clean, he just picked it out to make sure that all of other people could have a clean and health dinner. Kongzi was so surprised, then he knew that what one just saw was probably not the truth. Then this little story has been spread out in China, many parents tell this story to their next generation that how to make a right decision. We are all living in a society with lots of friends, there will be much time for us to get alone with each other, what may make a chance for us to charge someone. It is much vital to do the charge after a long objective thinking instead of making decision immedietly. After all, I think it is a thought-provoking suggestion and every member of the community should follow it, or there will be much misleadings and much unhappy between us. We must try our best to trust our friends,and do the wise decision by our own heart, not the eyes or ears of us all.
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