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陕西咸阳市实验中学2012届九年级下学期中考试英语作文附范文:奉献爱心倡议书

发布时间:2013-06-03 17:53浏览次数:1166
要求:
暑假即将来临,某校学生会打算在假期举行为贫困地区和受灾地区的孩子们奉献爱心的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书,号召同学们用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手,奉献自己的爱心。
要求:
1、文中应包含:至少两种帮助方式:这样做的目的和意义。
2、字数80~800;短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
As students, ___________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                           
 Student’s Union
                                                                  June 13, 2008
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Dear schoolmates, While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them. As students, we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes and toys.We can also donate some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world. We may raise money for charity by collecting used bottled, plastics, waste paper and so on , or by doing part-time jobs, such as, handing out advertisements, selling newspapers and so on. Making pen pals with them will be a better way to help deal with problems in their study. The more we devote/do, the better world would be! Student's Union June 13, 2008

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