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作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The saying "Knowledge is power" made by Francis Bacon, British philosopher.It becomes universally accepted by almost all people know. If we have no knowledge, we cannot succeed in doing any work.Knowledge is an abstract concept, but it has a huge power. Knowledge can change people's fate. Poor people can make themselves ridiculous by learning knowledge. Rural children can achieve their dreams of becoming urban people through knowledge in China. Successful launch of Chang' e No. Two means advanced aerospace technologies of China The invention of hybrid rice solved the problem of food for the human; the invention of the drug made deaths caused by the disease under control. These inventions were made because of the knowledge! The cultivation of talents is paid much attention in modern society. Profound knowledge can help you get a good job.Knowledge is a magic wand, managing people's fate. Knowledge can enrich people's life. Many people like reading, since they can enjoy reading and acquire knowledge. Several centuries ago, it took several years to be sent a message to another people in the world. Nevertheless, we can have it done in seconds today by computer. We can talk with our friends by telephone. Go to the university is a process of acquiring knowledge, however, many retired people continue to learn knowledge, because people must gain a lot of knowledge in order to survive. Knowledge is a gas station, giving people the energy. Knowledge can make China powerful and strong. Science and technology are the first productivity. The competition between countries is the competition of talents in contemporary society. After the Second World War, Japan suffered heavy losses owing to the failure. Nevertheless, 20 years later, it became the second largest economy in the world. Because japan develops science and education, the saying " laggard will be beaten" is true that doesn’t be changed forever. We have only to learn knowledge all the time. Country will be developed rapidly. The state will play a major role in the world. Knowledge serves as a catalyst, accelerating china prosperity. As is generally known, we students are the future of our motherland. Our motherland needs us to make it stronger very much. If we do not make efforts to acquire knowledge, our motherland will become weaker.The power of knowledge is great, let's try our best to learn knowledge well, let’s devote our lives to our motherland!
