小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friends. she is a beautiful girl, and I very like her .she haves a long black hair,two big black eyes ,and like wear red T-shirt. I think she very good ,classmate both like she. she is a clever girl. she likes sing song ,reading book, game computer. she play game computer very goods. she usually help me and others.