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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6299
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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As the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated,trust plays an increasingly important role in the life of individual members of society and the development of the society itself.In our daily life,we must maintain trust. As for students and teachers,trust is very important.On one hand,teachers believe students that they are honest,on the other hand,students don't cheat on the test,and they pass the examination on their own.consequently students could aquire more knowledge rather than feel compelled to do some bad things toward passing the examination and getting the high score.What's more,as for the salemen and consumer.Salemen sales the good thing for the consumer and don't live up to the trust of the consumers,the business will greater.According to these example,it is an urgent thing to take measures to help people maintain trust. In our daily life,we don't deceive others.however,that don't means we should trust others without judgement.We must learn to judge what is right and try our best to maintain trust.

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