2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Suppose a foreign friend of mine is going to visit your hometown.First,welcome to my hometown ,because my hometown is a wonderful place .I could introduced our customer and dress our traditional close. My hometown is a beautiful city in china.My hometown have most interesting place ,but i want important introduce three places .First ,my hometown have a species place of apple yard ,witch their product apple very popularity in china. Second,my hometown location besides a beautiful rive.When i were a child i offend playing on their rive by boat.So i could play with my foreign friend in there.Last,i will treat my friend dinner with my loves' people because i think home is best place in my heart. My hometown have most interesting place,welcome to you again.