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The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival.it can date back the Chu. there was a man named Quyuan, he was a minister of Chu. Due to the refusal of his advice, Quyuan felt that there was no way for him to contribute to his country, and then he walked towards the Miluo River and devote himself into the River. The Dragon Boat Festival is born for him. When hearing this terrible news, the Locals were very heartbroken, For a while they went there quickly and throw much food into the River in order not to make the hereo's body eaten by fish in the River. at the same time they were willing to take the boat on the river to find his body. unfortunately his body was missing! Owing to this incident,we had plenty of festivals about him. such as: as soon as it is 5th may in Lunar year, everyone will go home and reunite with their families. the most important one is that we, as a Chinese where we are, will buy Zongzi and eat them to memorize the hero— Quyuan. Also in the many areas of China, there will be all kinds of competitions of Dragon Boat. every area there are a lots of attendants who want to attend this competition.
