2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am a chinese girl,and I love my country very much.If I have to choose one place which I like so much ,I would choose Beijing.It is the common choice .Why? firstly,Beijing is the capital city in our country ;second,Beijing is a historical city, there are a variety of antique buildings ;third,Beijing is a amazing city.If you come here,you have to love this place.