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新东方托福高分作文:电影:严肃还是娱乐?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:44浏览次数:561
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题目要求:

Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

分两个段落讨论两种电影,说明这两种电影都有他们的价值,都值得观赏。最后一段说在不同的心情下,有着不同的选择。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that everyone needs some free time to relax himself or herself.And one of the most cheerful amusements is movie.What's more,there are two common kinds of movies that one is serious which is designed to make the audience think and another one is only for fun. In my daily life,there are a lot of leisure time then I will spend plenty of them on movies.Sometime when I really feel stressful or pressure in campus,I would be prefer to watch something just cheers me up and makes me laugh.Because at that time I do need to amuse and entertain myself rather than watch others which are serious or complicated to make myself become more exthuasted. Otherwise sometime it is better for me to pick some educational movies up to lighten my life especially when I feel like getting lost. Above all mentioned,the two types are both worthy watching.It depends on the situations.

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