题目要求:
Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析:
分两个段落讨论两种电影,说明这两种电影都有他们的价值,都值得观赏。最后一段说在不同的心情下,有着不同的选择。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
There is no doubt that everyone needs some free time to relax himself or herself.And one of the most cheerful amusements is the movie.What's more,there are two common kinds of movies that one is serious which is designed to make the audience think and another one is only for fun. In my daily life,there are a lot of leisure time then I will spend plenty of them on movies.Sometime when I really feel stressful or pressure in campus,I would be prefer to watch something just cheers me up and makes me laugh.The reason is that at that time I do need to amuse and entertain myself rather than watching another kind of movies which are serious or complex to make myself become exhausted. Otherwise sometime it is better for me to pick up some movies which are educational to bright my life especially when I feel like getting lost. Above all mentioned,the two types are both value.It depends on the situations.